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i dont know why, but she scares me here.

The mouth makes her look creepy

I'd say her entire face and the way her body twists.

Honestly don't see it. Looks really cute to me. Mayhaps the piercing eyes, probably, but her body and mouth look fine to me.

No striped pantsu, no 5 pts.

ModuleLFS said:
No striped pantsu, no 5 pts.

No shimapantsu? On Miku? Outrageous!

But well pantsus, white pantsus is the best <3

Beautiful Miku! :3

My turn.

The color is dull and bland. There's a lack of a collarbone, and the smudgy-like paint on her clothes aren't attractive. I suppose Sakimichan was still deciding how the legs are going to be positioned and the overall paint job is just bad. Considering that this is a WIP, I'll let it go.

What I won't let go is her eyes. It's extremely similar to looking at a dead fish's eyes. Her left hand being near her lips is supposed to indicate something sexually suggestive, but there's absolutely no emotion or light in her eyes. It's not the mouth. It's not her entire face, or the way her body twists because every person is able to twist her body that way. Coppertalon was right. It's the eyes that's bugging people.

It's the little things that can change the entire picture.

only fully focused on face
fat western style lips
hair not finished and even cut off
no shimapan
legs not even finished
'add stuff for cool' style wings (unfinished)
background done is less then three minutes
lack of determination just shines in this piece of work

I shiggy diggy do hope this isn't a finished piece of sakimichan